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dimecres, 13 de maig del 2009

3rd TERM ORAL PRESENTATION: BULLYING





Bullying Bullying annacosta

QUESTIONS

Presentation

Did you use any resources? Yes, like the other oral presentations we’ve used a Power Point presentation with pictures and videos.
Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes. We think that the presentation was entertaining, and the video whe showed at the end of the presentation was interesting as well.

Body language and eye contact

Did you look at your audience most of the time? We looked at the audience more than other times, but we were still looking at the paper, and also at the screen.
Did you read from your notes? Not all the time.
Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? I think I did some involuntary gestures, but not specifically.

Structure

Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, we tried first to introduce the topic and then develop it.
Did you use discourse makers to make your ideas more clear? Not much really.

Content

Did you introduce interesting, new information to your audience? Yes, we think the information was not boring, it was an interesting topic explained in a very simple way.
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books...? Yes we did. We looked up information in the Internet about the topic.
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? I think there was a bit of everything: we developed the subject very superficially, because it's a very extensive topic, but we also introduced some interesting data.

Language

Did you check your grammar?
Yes, we did.
Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? We looked up at the dictionary very technical words that we didn’t know how to say them in English .

Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, we use a lot of times “and”, “but”, “so”, “In fact”,...
Did you use fillers? We used less fillers than other times.


Pronunciation & Intonation

Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Not all the words, for example, I didn’t know how to pronounce “environment”,but almost all.
Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No.
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? We changed the tone of voice a lot of times, but I think it was involuntary.
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? It has been more fluent than the last time we did it.

Self evaluation

What mark did you get according to you? I think this oral presentation was better than the previous ones, it has been more fluent and more organized, and the pronunciation has also improved. But I think we still need to relate and link things. I'd put a mark of 7 or 8.

Translation

Well, in this term we've decided to talk about bullying, because we think is a social issue that exists in schools and high schools, and many times we don't realize that it exists.
Bullying is any form of psychological abuse, verbal or physical conduct among schoolchildren. The dominant type of violence is the emotional and it happens often in the classroom and school break time. Bullying is common in children between 12-13 years, and is more common in girls than in boys.
Because of the bullying, the victim generates psychological disorders. Victims live terrified with the idea of going to school. They're nervous, sad and lonely in their daily lives. In some cases, the hardness of the situation can get to suicide. Over 350 million children suffer some form of violence at school.

We can see that there are eight types of bullying:

1-Lock social
2- Harassment
3- Manipulation
4- Constraints
5- Social Exclusion
6- Intimidation
7- Assault
8-Threats

1. Lock social: The aggressor wants to marginalize and isolate socially the victim, so the victim feels weak, helpless and stupid.
2. Harassment: Harassment: The aggressor acts with contempt, disrespect, and without consideration of the dignity of the victims. The signals of this type of bullying are contempt, hate, the nicknames, cruelty...
3. Manipulation: It distorts the social image of the victim. All the things that the victim makes are negative.
4. Constraints: The aggressor obliges the victim to realize actions against himself. With this way the aggressor can control the victim and he can get what he wants.
5. Social exclusion: They don't want the victim to participate. Aggressors treat the victim as if he was invisible, they don’t want him to participate in their games.
6. Intimidation: The aggressor creates fear to the victim. The person feel threatened. The aggressors attack the victim in the hallways and when school finishes.
7. Assault: The aggressor hits the victim.
8. Threats: The aggressor threatened and extorted to the person and his family.

Risk factors

Profile of the aggressor:
- The aggressors not always have a mental illness or a severe personality disorder. The main problem is lack of empathy. Without empathy the aggressor can’t understand what the person suffers, is totally insensitive.
- A 70% of the aggressors blame the victim saying that he had begun the discussion, so they haven’t got remorse of what they do.
- It can also be a bad family environment: abuse, humiliation…

Profile of the victim:
- There are people that can't react
- They’re not sociable and they’re sensitive.
- They don't know how to defend themselves because they have shame, and aggressions are very harmful to them.
The school environment:
In the school where the environment is bad and the teachers don't know how to control conflicts, bullying is more frequent.
The television:
There are TV programs that show violence as a good thing, and children tend to imitate. However, experts are still debating the effects of TV.

Consequences of bullying

On the victims:
- They can suffer physical injury, fear and anxiety.
- In school performance gets worse, because they are not going to school or they have difficulties to concentrate.
- Stress causes suffering stomach pains, headaches, not eating ...


On the aggressor:
- They may have social problems; it is difficult to live with others.
- In adulthood they can have a criminal life.

Conclusion

- The female suicides could be reduced by 10% if the bullying disappears.
- 22% of Spanish children are exposed to suffer bullying.
- Being overweight and having a bad economic situation increases the possibility of suffer bullying.
- Bullying is a common problem in this society, destroys self-esteem and self-confidence.

dilluns, 2 de març del 2009

Oral Presentation: THE BAHAMAS

NAME & TOPIC: Laura Peña and Anna Costa: The Bahamas.

POWER POINT:


The Bahamas




QUESTIONS

Presentation

Did you use any resources? Yes, we’ve used a Power Point presentation with pictures, videos and music.
Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, we think that the photos, videos and music made the presentation relevant and attractive, and so entertaining.

Body language and eye contact

Did you look at your audience most of the time? Not really. We spent too much time looking at the screen instead of the audience.
Did you read from your notes? Not all the time, but there were so much data and it’s impossible to memorize all of them.
Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Yes, we used quite gestures, but not expressly for the audience.

Structure

Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? We tried to separate the different topics we were going to talk about.
Did you use discourse makers to make your ideas more clear? Not much really.

Content

Did you introduce interesting, new information to your audience? Yes, we think the information was not so boring, it was interesting and original.
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books...? Of course, we did. We found information especially in the Internet, because it’s easier.
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? We think the information was more superficial, but we also included details of the festivities or food, for example.

Language

Did you check your grammar?
Yes, we did.
Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? The vocabulary wasn’t quite rich, but we found a lot of words in the dictionary, except the word “escut”, that it’s not in the dictionary.
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, we use a lot of times “and”, “but”, “so”...
Did you use fillers? We use especially “well”, or “uhm”.


Pronunciation & Intonation

Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Not all the words, but almost all.
Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No.
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? We changed the tone of voice a lot of times, when we were not sure about what we were saying or when we changed the topics, for example.
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? Well, we think there were so much breaks and interruptions.

Self evaluation

What mark did you get according to you? Well, in fact we didn’t had enough time to finish the oral presentation, and we became nervous because of it, so we could made it so much better. We wanted to show some videos and music but we couldn’t. Anyway, we could have a better preparation. The personal mark we get according to us could be a 6 more or less.





LITERAL TRANSCRIPTION

Hi,we're Laura and Anna and we're going to talk about Bahamas because we were thinking about an original country and we decided to talk about Bahamas
because it's a very interesting place and so beautiful and it's like a dream holidays.
Money: dolar of Bahamas
Flag: blue, yellow and black.
Flower: The national flower is the Yellow elder.
The symbolic bird of the Bahamas is the red flamingo.
Form of government: Parliamentary monarchy
Climate: Between tropical and subtropical.
Non-official languages: Creole dialect, Greek and Chinese.
Ethnic groups: African, black, European.
National Sports: The most practiced sports are golf, diving, snorkeling and fishing.
Is an independent state located in the Antilles.
It consists of an archipelago of 24 habited islands, 600 inhabited, and over 2,000 rocks and reefs.It’s located in the Atlantic Ocean, at the east of Florida (USA), north of Cuba and west of the Turks and Caicos Islands.
The capital is Nassau, which is the most populous city.
Native birds:
- Barn Owl
- Great blue heron
- Green heron
- Turquoise bird
There are a lot of dangerous animals and plants in Bahamas but we’ve been able to put only some of them.
- Black widow: a black spider a red stain in the back, is fatal.
- Centipede
- Cuban tree frog
- Rajiformes and Jellyfish
- Venomous ivy

The traditional music of the Bahamas is the Goombay, which means "rhythm" in Bantu. A drum is used to create it. The first goombay drums were made from discarded barrels and rum casks, but as the decades passed these items came to be in short supply. The most famous band in Bahamas who plays this music is “The Gombay dance band”.
Jumpin'n Jammin carnival: It's between July 25 and August 2. Begins the first Monday in August at four o'clock in the morning. The activities of the carnival finish with the street party that usually lasts from six p.m. to midnight.
Goombay summer festival: It’s a festival that lasts three nights. There is Dancing, competitions, fairs, parades and costumes,...The days are dedicated to participate in beach sports and other entertainment and cultural activities.
Junkanoo: Junkanoo is the famous national festival. Everyone gets dressed and downtown Nassau sounding bells, horns, whistles and the strong rhythm of drums.
In July is the largest fishing tournament in the islands. Also in September there are tournaments of Music and Dance.
There are other festivities that are not typical of there like:

- Three Kings
- Christmas day
- New year
- International worker’s day
- International women’s day
- National independence day

- Peas n’ Rice: pork with onions, celery, tomatoes, rice and peas. Is the national dish.

- Seafood: Is an important part of the diet in the Bahamas. The “conch” is a large type of ocean mollusc that has white flesh. The conch is delicious raw, but also fried, in soups and salads and stews.

- The rock lobster of Bahamas: is served grilled, in salads or chopped.

- Fresh fish: Is also an important part of the cuisine, The brunch is a popular boiled fish.

- Peas: pea soup with balls of beef with salt, or pea soup and ham are typical.

- Souse: is a soup with water, onions, celery, peppers and chicken, oxtail or pigs' feet.

- Kalik: it’s the official beer of the Bahamas.

- Acklins: Is a part of the group of islands which are near the lake basin called Marine Acklins. Coronel Hill it's a place for people that likes the tourism and quiet.
- Cat Island: This is one of the central islands of the Bahamas.

- Abaco Island: Is located in the northern islands and the Bahamas including Great Abaco and Little Abaco. There people do sailing and other tourist activities

- Eleuthera: It's one of the main tourist attractions of the Bahamas. It's at 80 km from Nassau.

- Mayaguana Is the farthest of all the islands of the Bahamas, the people practice diving there.

- West Grand Bahama: It’s special for the construction of exclusive hotels for tourists. The most important urban centers are 8 Mile Rock, Pinder's Point, Holmes Rock and West End.

dijous, 20 de novembre del 2008

ORAL PRESENTATION






TOPIC: FILMS.

Presentation:

1. Did you use any resources? Yes, I used the Powerpoint.

2. Were the resources relevant and attractive? I think so.

Body language and eye contact:

3. Did you look at your audience most of the time? Not to the entire audience, I think I was always watching the same people.

4. Did you read from your notes? Only once.

5. Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of you audience? Yes, but always the same.

Structure:

6. Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? In my presentation there weren't an importance order.

7. Did you use discourse makers to make your ideas more clear? Yes.

Content:

8. Did you introduce interesting, NEW information to your audience? I think it was interesting.

9. Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books? Yes, a little bit.

10. Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? It wasn't superficial, I think it was original.

Language:

11. Did you use check your grammar? Yes, I checked the grammar some times.

12. Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? Yes, how much I could.

13. Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, some.

14. Did you use fillers? Not many.

Pronunciation & Intonation:

15. Did you know how to pronunce all you words? Yes, but I think that I pronounced bad some of them.

16. Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? Yes, with a on-line dictionary.

17. Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? I used my normal voice.

18. Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I think it was quite fluid.

Self-Evaluation:

I should pronounce the words better, and gesticulate better.


Write down a LITERAL TRANSCRIPTION of your presentation.

Well, I decided to talk about some films I've seen and that I liked and I found interesting. I've only been able to put 5 because with 5 minutes I don't have time to put them all.

Detroit rock city (1999): Four members of a high school band called Mystery do everything they can to attend a KISS concert in Detroit. Their names are Lex, Trip, Hawk and Jam. In order to make it to the show they must steal, cheat, strip, etc… generally do whatever it takes to see the band. It’s a very funny film.

The educators (2004): It’s about three friends, two boys called Jan and Peter, and a girl, called Jule. They want to change the state of the world. They formed a group called “The edukators”. They come in the house of rich people and change the furniture site, hiding objects, etc, but they never use violence and never stole anything. It’s a kind of protest about rich people. Everything is complicated when Jule falls in love with the two guys, and then they get into trouble.

Clockwork orange (1971): It’s a classic. It’s about a young man called Alex, his passions are ultra violence, rape, steal, and Beethoven. He is the ringleader of a group; they hit, rape and terrorize people. Alex caught it and locked in prison and he voluntarily submitted to a program that nullifies this bad behaviour. Seems to work, but at the end of the movie is shown that it hasn't worked.

Sid and Nancy (1986): It's about the relationship of Sid, the bassist of the Sex Pistols, a punk group, and Nancy, his girlfriend. In the movie they fall into drugs, Nancy gives heroin to Sid, and finally Nancy dies murdered. It's a film based on real ed, but Johnny Rotten, lead singer of the Sex Pistols, says that's a lie. Real or not, it's a very interesting film.

Transpotting(1996): This film is about a group of people who live only by drugs. They are addicted to heroin or alcohol. One of them, Mark, decides to stop drugs and do something useful. It's very interesting the philosophy of life that he has while he is within the world of drugs, without responsabilities or worries, cares only get more drugs.


Check your Language and Structure. Can you correct your mistakes?

I can improve my pronunciation and my entonation. Maybe I should use more fillers.

Here I put my power point:

Films


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